Hello everyone! There is a little text translated from Russian to English. I need native English speaker (British one would be preferable) to read and correct it. Could someone help me? I will be grateful.:)
At the head of the table there is a man who looks 45 years old (in fact, he is actually 61) named __. He is dressed in a quality cut suit with a white shirt. The fancy bowtie around his neck seems awkward in the tense atmosphere of the conference hall. His face is clean shaven. He has a neat haircut; not too short and not too long. His hair is starting to turn grey around his temples. This man's appearance is likable. He has a calm, clear and very convincing voice.
In the head of the table there is a man looked 45 years old (in fact he’s 61) named. He is dressed in a well-cut suit and a white shirt. Fancy bowtie on his neck seems to be awkward in the tense atmosphere of the conference hall. His face is clean-shaven. He has a neat hair cut: not very short but not too long. He started going grey round the temples. Appearance of this man is likely. He has calm clear and very convincing voice.