Last summer, I went to London. I visited my grandparents. Then I went to Cambridge. I spent two weeks in Cambridge. I slept in a tent. I swam in the sea. I ate lots of ice cream. I drunk coconut milk. I took a lot of selfies.

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Last summer, I went to London. - Yes

I visited my grandparents. - Yes

Then I went to Cambridge. - Yes (consider --> Afterwards, I went to Cambridge.)

I spent two weeks in Cambridge.  - Yes

I slept in a tent.  Yes

I swam in the sea. - Yes

I ate lots of ice cream. - Yes

I drunk coconut milk. - No (wrong verb tense --> use the past tense of "to drink" - I drank coconut milk.)

I took a lot of selfies. - Yes

Suggestion - Learn about and use conjunctions: words used to connect clauses or sentences or to coordinate words in the same clause (e.g. and, but, if ).

 

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Hi,

Instead of Saperatate sentences you can combind those sentenses by using connecting words (conjuctions)

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Use a spell checker!  Good advice but bad spelling and incorrect capitalization.

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